Response to Rhiannon's Post

I agree to Rhiannon's point on chapter 8. The book mentions to choose plain words over fancy ones. But in the real world, our employer recommends using these fancy verbs to strengthen our communication to sound more technical and professional. The book gives great advice on creating a reader-centered approach on communication. It's all up to our readers to decide what they want to see, and in this case of our employer, we must adapt to their communication methods. For they are our readers in most cases.